A few lines on
a not so forgotten song
A dripping sound
made me open the windows of my home
Although it’s familiar
how could i not know
Every now and then
its rhythm keeps knocking on my door
I’m drench but i’m not wet
got a roof above my head
I see flowers now celebrating
dancing for all the waiting
To quench their thirst
after hibernating
When sunshine sleeps
and started dreaming
But songs of yesteryear
always linger
When raindrops fall
like a hurried summer
And through it all
i still remember
The broken pen
and the unwritten letter
Unspoken words
and tears of yonder
Embrace by an old friend
Here comes the rain again.
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I really like this, nice flow and wonderful images!
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Thanks Lynz. I’m glad you like this.
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Very nice!
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Thanks. again
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Very well done
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Thanks The Spirit Keepers.
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You’re welcome
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tragically beautiful.
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Thanks for the compliment Ted. Stay artful.
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I loved it! This is ❤
Happy to connect!
Do check out my writings too, will appreciate your reviews 😇
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Thanks Revaparihar. I did, love your writings. keep writing.
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Thank you so much 😊
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You’re welcome.
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Wow…What a poetic bliss !!
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Thanks Kavita.
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This is beautiful. Great work.
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Thanks EmBe. I’m glad you like it.
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So lovely poem 🙂 Rain can do wonders.
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Thanks Darshith.
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Beautiful poem.
~Brïdgêtté
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Thanks Bridgette.
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No, it was my pleasure to read it.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words.
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Lovely images in your poem, Joel. I love the lines, ‘When raindrops fall like a hurried summer’. 🙂
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Thanks Millie. So flattering to hear you appreciating my poems and the graphics i made. Thank you for the compliments.
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You’re very welcome, Joel. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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This is a truly wonderful piece. Beautifully written!
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Thanks Jarrod. You create wonderful pieces too. Thanks again.
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Thanks Joel. That’s kind of you to say but this moment belongs to you my friend. I love how the pictures you choose just don’t accompany your written piece but are incorporated.
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What can i say? Thank you for dropping by and showing your appreciation. Take Care.
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nice poem, subtle and profound..thanks for sharing ..:)
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You’re welcome Alisha
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THINKING OF ANNIE LENOX AND THE ERHYTHMIC…HOPING THEY AND I DON’T SUCCOMB TO IT!
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Thanks Jonathan.
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You put things so gently…I appreciate that. well done.
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I’m glad yo appreciate it. Thanks again Jonathan
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Perfectly penned words that clutched my Heart. Fantastic, Joel.
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It makes me smile everytime someone appreciates my poem. Thank you AmyRose.
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I know the feeling. My smiles are huge believe me, just like now. Thank you, Joel! ❤
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You’re welcome AmyRose.
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Very nice 🙂
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Thanks for the nomination Inner Ramblings. I am so honored everytime a fellow blogger nominate my blog for an award. Although i stop accepting nomination last year. It doesn’t mean i cant thank you. One of these days i’ll set a time thanking all those who nominated my blog. Have a great weekend. Thanks and Take Care.
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You’re welcome!
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My father had aphasia (baby brother to Alzheimer’s) before he passed, and the rain confused him slightly. It’s a very sad disease.
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Yes it is really sad. Thanks Julie for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate you dropping by. Thanks again.
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A thought-provoking poem! I especially like ‘the broken pen and the unwritten letter,’ … so much unsaid and the next line confirms with ‘unspoken words.’ Sad and beautiful!
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Thanks Wendy. I’m glad you liked it.
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Reblogged this on Br Andrew's Muses and commented:
A nice surprise
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Thanks Andrew.
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Lovely way to show Alzheimer’s disease.
Also thanks for following my blog. I love company!
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You’re welcome Sharron. Thanks for the kind words and taking time reading my posts.
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I should’ve found this one while I was waiting for my operation. Well said and beautifully written
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Thank you Bj. Wishing you’re well now after the operation. Take Care.
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What a great poem. Sadly, I have had a few family members die from Alzheimer’s disease.
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Thanks Cheryl for appreciating the poem. Thanks too for sharing your story.. I appreciate it. Have a great day ahead. Thanks for stopping by.
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