You knit or you weave,
whatever it is
The red poncho when i see,
reminds me of your kiss.
The magic of its fabric
The strength of its stitch
The mystery of its weave
The warmth of the yarn
that embrace me as i wear it
Somehow i knew
the red poncho is like you.
It covers me when i’m naked
though i wonder why it’s knitted
in a way that’s complicated.
Just like the memories
that you leave
the red poncho
reminds me
As you knit and weave,
that a needle is needed
to create a lingering memory.
Kindly click/tap this to read Selective Amnesia. Thanks.
Copyright © 2014 Joys of Joel by Joel F. All Rights Reserved.
I love this. It is so sweet and clever.
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Thank you for appreciating the poem Daisy. Have a lovely weekend.
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T Y – back to Monday again – ha ha!
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haha, Just like that song, manic monday. Have a great week. Thanks again Daisy for stopping by.
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I love how you’ve woven (knitted) your words.
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Thank you Lulu for appreciating it. Have a lovely weekend.
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Love, love love. Lovely words 🙂
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Thanks Tita Arlene. Enjoy the lovely sunday.
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So beautifully written and loved the words so much, simply marvellous Joel. 👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Thank you so much Kamal. You always find time to stop by and leave a comment. I appreciate it. Take Care and enjoy the lovely weekend.
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Thanks Joel and always welcome friend.👍👍👍👍
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🙂
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Thanks so much Joel. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Thanks too Kamal. Take Care.
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You too
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Thanks Kamal, you’re so sweet.
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🙏🙏🙏🙏
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🙂
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Striking creativity, I’ll certainly remember it next time I see a red poncho 🙂
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Oh, that’s so sweet Bea. Thank you for your kind words. Have a lovely weekend.
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As always I read your posts and wonder if I should bother putting pen to paper 😁. Your words come alive Joel And it’s always so sweet even when it’s sad. Thus gave me warmth as I read through it. Beautiful beautiful words. Thanks for sharing 😊💟
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You’re welcome Sunesiss. Thanks too for sharing your thoughts. Your encouraging word is music to my ears. Thanks too for stopping by. Have a lovely sunday.
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Enjoyed reading your stitchings of words placed together.
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Thanks Sobia for your kind words. Have a great week ahead.
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My pleasure. You too have a good week.
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Thanks.
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Beautiful and true.
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Thanks Joanna for leaving a comment. Thanks for dropping by.
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Nicely written and quite clever in its weaving serious with light hearted subjects.
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Thank you for the compliment Reocochran. Have a lovely day ahead. Thanks for stopping by.
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Yup,still following you! Have a wonderful holiday season, Joel. Hugs, Robin
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Thanks for the hugs, Happy Holidays too Robin.
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Oh, please call me Robin. Awhile back I sped read through a few of your blogs and you “scolded” me. I didn’t take it personally. As far as I know, I still follow you just don’t get any notices in my email account due to blogging on a Galaxy 6 phone which says I have too much of my storage space taken up to ” be in synch” with both WordPress and Hotmail. Lol
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Wow, i scolded you? I din’t know i’m doing that through my poem. 🙂
Thank you for letting me know Robin, i appreciate that.
I understand, yes that happens to me too, i can’t read all the posts of all the blogs i’m following and i know that’s okay. We just don’t have the time..
Thanks too for the follow, the likes and most importantly for sharing your thoughts (leaving your comments) here.
Have a lovely weekend. Take Care.
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This was really fascinating to me! The imagery and magical property, I really really like it! 😊
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Thank you Mspahr. I’m glad you like it. Thanks too for dropping by. Have a great day ahead.
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