“Hello,
do you remember me?
I’m back in town.”
I hear you
on the other line
while i see
the postman
outside the window.
The postcards
you sent on time
The letters
i dared to hide
“Hey i’m back in town,
you still remember me?”
I couldn’t
dare to speak
while i stare
at the angel
in my bed
“Hey, im back in town
you still remember me?”
I put the phone down
because
i remember you
all the time.
Daily Prompt: Unseen
Copyright © 2017 Joys of Joel by Joel F. All Rights Reserved.
Poignant
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Thanks Derrick for sharing your thought. Appreciate it. Have a great monday.
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wow dear friend Joel such beautiful lines penned with so much depth in them. Great post. Loved every stanza.
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Thanks Kamal for always stopping by. I’m glad you love it. Wishing you a great week ahead.
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Thanks Joel but I was thinking today only have not heard from you nor seen any post from quite sometime and there you send such a wonderful post. Have a great day.
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Been busy lately, the grandest, religious and cultural festival in my city had just concluded… so much for alibis, i’m back in wordpress town, i’m glad you still remember me. 🙂
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K and yes why not Joel though there are many bloggers who come and leave us. There are so many new ones too who keep on coming.
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Thanks Kamal for the time. Life gives us boundless blessings and blogging is one of them. Yes some people come, some people go, some we prefer to remember some we don’t. Either way i will always be thankful for those who stayed or for those who pass by. Thank you Kamal. Have a great 2017 for all of us.
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Yes dear Joel a happy and joyful 2017 for all of us. Have a happy day.
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You too. Thanks again.
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welcome.
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😉
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its a wonderful poem
I really can feel this thoughts…..
Thank you for the lines with such deep emotions
Have a great week!
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Thanks Trixi for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate the compliment. Thanks too for the time. Have a great week too.
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Very powerful! Tension and betrayal are intriguing to read. Well done, Joel!
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Thanks Rose for your kind words. Thanks too for stopping by.
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I enjoy peeking in to see what you’ve been up to! Have a super week 🙂
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I’m glad you still somehow remember me 🙂 . Have a great week too. Take Care.
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Salamat! Of course I remember you, Joel. 🙂 I’m sorry; it gets tougher balancing work and blogging, but I try to visit when I can. Thank you for stopping by when you’re able, as well!
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Likewise. Thanks too.
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Oh wow!
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Thanks for stopping by
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Wow! Felt the turmoil. Great job!
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Thanks Joy Roses.
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Nice!
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Thanks Marissa.
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“I put the phone down/because/i remember you/all the time.” youch. I can relate! Very nice.
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Thanks Theresa. I’m glad you like it. Thanks for stopping by.
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Great post😊
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Thanks Lamarrwenrich. Have a wonderful tuesday.
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It will be a good day 😊 wishing you the same
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Thanks again.
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😊
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🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thanks PD. Have a wonderful week ahead.
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Beautiful and haunting, Joel.
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Thanks D. Wallace Peach. I’m flattered by your encouraging words.
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This is so touching.
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Thanks Joanna for sharing your thoughts.
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Remember you aaallll.. the time!!!!!
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Thanks Nita, i appreciate your beautiful memory. Thanks for dropping by.
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Everytime Joel
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Thanks.
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Speechless! That’s it!
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Thanks Nikesh. You made me speechless with your kind words, nope, you actually made me smile. Thank you for stopping by. Have a great day ahead.
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Thank you, and visiting your site was an absolute pleasure. I’ll visit in the future is well, as soon as I get some time.
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You’re always welcome to drop by. Thanks too for your kind words.
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