I count the syllables
to create a haiku
I created a rhyme
to write a poetry
I write my thoughts
so you’ll remember me
You remember my words,
but not my story
You touch
but never hold my hand
You sing
but never invited me to dance
Because you say
i knew you knew
who i am
How could it be
if you never understand
my story?
Daily Prompt: Interior
Copyright © 2017 Joys of Joel by Joel F. All Rights Reserved.
Wow nice. I don’t know you but I know you want to be known.
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Thanks J for stopping by and leaving a comment here. Much appreciated. Have a great year ahead.
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Really nice. Loved it.
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Thanks Yagnesh for stopping by. I’m glad you liked it.
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Love listening to your story Joel in Rhyme or not
Have a Very Happy New Year my friend.
🙂 Sue
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Thanks for your kind words Sue. Have a wonderful year to you and your family too. Happy 2017.
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Joel, as always, I enjoy your visual art so much! How do you get your idea for the visual to go with your words?
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Thanks Theresa, i’m glad i made you smile . Well, i guess my crazy mind is the culprit. Although, I guess looking at magazines, reading books, and oh yes reading blogs from people i follow inspires me, a collective effect of all the creative factors that i encounter or experience.
Thanks for stopping by Theresa. Have a lovely 2017.
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Very Nice!
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Thanks Pd. Have a Blessed New Year.
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i love it Joel ! …. happy new year !
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Thanks Nekkie, Happy New Year too.
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Right on Joel, I sent you an email vial your contact form but you never acknowledged…
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Oh i’m sorry. Thank you Marie for letting me know. I apologize for the missed reply. Take Care.
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I can see the truth in this poem.
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Thanks Robyn. Have a great week ahead.
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Wow I love this Joel! Happy New Year to you! I love your art and poems so sorry I don’t visit much! Just wanted to say Hi and thank you for your continued support! 😀
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Thank you Michelle Marie, been busy lately, sorry for the late reply. Happy New Year too and thanks for stopping by.
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i love this…
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Thanks Smart and Funny. I’m glad you like it. Have a great day.
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thanks for checking my site…fellow bloggers like you are an inspiration to new blogger s like me…
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You’re welcome. I enjoyed your smart and funny talk post, the one with the elderly wisdom is very inspiring.
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thank you
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Thanks too. Have a great monday.
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Enjoyed reading it!
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Thanks Rumpa for letting me know. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks too for the time. Have a wonderful tuesday.
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Fun and thought provoking poems. I don’t count syllables to write Haiku or any other poems.
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Thanks Byung for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it. Thanks too for stopping by. Have a great wednesday.
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Well stated! Too many skim the surface without looking in.
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Thanks Alan for the thought, appreciate it. Have a great day.
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Wow ♡♡♡
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Thanks Love Quirky for stopping by.
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