Throw in
a penny
So you
can be my honey
Do i need
to throw a nickel
So you can love
me a little?
Throw in
a dime
Why can’t you
be mine?
It baffles me
really
Why you
still ignore me
Can i be
your lover
if i throw in
a quarter?
Still
you’re a riddle
and a very
pricey puzzle
Do you need
a dollar
or a love
that is stellar?
kiss me
with an answer
i am
your worthy beggar.
#SoCS Prompt Oct.8/16: Coin
To see rules and join kindly click / tap this Stream of Consciousness Prompt . Thanks.
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Lovely rhyme, sounding as delightful as an old childish song. Thank you.
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Mushy poem for all material girls and boys, just kidding.
Thanks for the compliment Bob. Thanks too for stopping by.
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Haha, you’re so funny. Well, you know,
it’s my pleasure to visit your site, Joel. I really enjoy reading you.
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Thanks for that wonderful compliment. Have a great weekend.
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Cute, cute rhyme, so well done… I’m jealous. Great skill in the simplicity and flow of it, no wandering off the theme. Great *LIKE*
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Thanks Sha’Tara for that lovely compliment. Have a great weekend.
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Very enjoyable verse!
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Thanks Perdebytjie.
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This is great. I love it!
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Thanks Chez Shea. Have a great weekend.
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So Nice.
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Thanks Shayari. I appreciate you like it.
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Most Welcome Sir.
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Just call me Joel. Thanks Dilkash for stopping by.
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Okay Joel Ji.
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Thanks, have a great weekend. Take Care.
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Welcome,U Too.
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Thanks again.
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This is delightful 😊
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Thanks Jacqueline for your kind words. Have a great weekend.
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That is a great poem!
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Oh, Thank You MJ, is it okay if i call you MJ, initials of your first name?
Thanks for appreciating the poem.
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My pleasure. Well of course. You are a talented poet.
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Thank you for your kind words. I love your h2o photo , it’s really fantastic. If only i could take photos like that.
I felt so honored a great artist like you read this blog. Thanks again and have a great weekend.
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Thank you, that was most kind! 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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What a wonderful rhyme and your amazing picture too Joel. Too good felt so nice reading your poem. 👍
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Thank you kamal. I appreciate your compliments. Take Care and Have a great week ahead..
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That last line made the entire poem. Charming, a bit sad, and very sweet.
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Thanks Shanjeniah for stopping by.
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I love it! Simple, yet complete. Thanks again for participating in SoCS! 😀
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Thanks Linda for stopping by. You’re welcome.
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Nice!
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Thanks Tosha. Have a great day.
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You too
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Thanks.
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I LOVE it, Joel 🙂
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Thanks Paola. I appreciate it you stopping by. Take Care.
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Lovely Rhyming. All around the “Wish Pond Well”.
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Thanks Cattie for your lovely words. Thanks too for dropping by.
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Very creative. Love it.
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Thanks Eden of Knowledge for the compliment. Have a great day.
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